September 12, 2007

Nature writing

Nature writers these days increasingly trade in elegy. This is not a new realm for them, to be sure. But the pace of change is itself changing, and we elbow what was out of the way at an increasing clip.

I have been working on the Joshua tree book for ten years. If I had knocked it out in one year, it might have resided in that other great genre of nature writing, the paean. There were threats to the tree in 1997, to be sure, some of them dire. But more has changed in the last three years than in the previous seven. Driving last week across the western Mojave, I saw that the great, wide-dispersed Joshua groves near Boron might not last much longer. Near the road at least, on in four or five had been stripped of their bark like cork oaks. A few years back Todd Esque and colleagues found that antelope ground squirrels, gophers, jackrabbits and other mammals in Joshua Tree National Park were eating the bark for food and moisture in dry years, with significant mortality to the trees. Animals in the Boron area have evidently learned the trick. Or perhaps the damage is done by human vandals, which would be worse news. I’ll need to get out of the car next month to check.

It might be difficult to find Esque et al‘s study trees in Joshua Tree NP for comparison: thousands of them burned in 2005 and 2006.

Perhaps ten years ago I was talking with a fellow writer about a local natural history magazine published by a local science museum. The editor of this magazine, my friend told me, insisted that nothing smacking of environmental advocacy would see print in his magazine. This was a publication devoted to science, after all, and so an article on the salamanders of the Sierra Nevada could describe the animals ranges, appearance, behavior and ecological role, but not their impending doom by subdivision, grazing, or acid rain. In extreme cases, I gather, a species could be referred to as “threatened with extinction” or some such, but any description of who it was doing the threatening was out of bounds. (To be fair there were special issues of the magazine, one of which I wrote for, for which the rule was suspended.)

It would be a lovely thing to be able to find a natural subject that did not risk either elegy or bowdlerizing. To be able to write about the isbjorn, for instance, talking about their ferocity, their resilience, their occasional counterintuitively gentle play with sled dogs, without mentioning Kyoto and the Bush administration and the likelihood that the vast majority of isbjorn face horrible deaths by drowning when their traditional habitat becomes unfrozen open ocean.

I would love to be able to do that without feeling irrevocably ashamed of myself.

With paeans you run the risk of being trite, but that’s true of most forms. I tend to find them less trite when they have a bit of elegy stirred in, when the thing being described has met adversity and prevailed somehow. But that which prevails is prevalent, and what is prevalent these days? Paeans to rats and starlings are edgy, true enough, but for those people who are not A-list bloggers or their regulars, edginess gets old in extremely short order.

And don’t get me wrong. I like rats. I even, truth be told, like starlings, at least one at a time. But writing paeans to the weedy species that currently prevail is, at its root, as much a lie as failing to mention the looming extinction of the polar bear. Put a starling on the dais and you guarantee an elephant in the room. The starlings of the world prevail, but at whose expense?

So elegies are honest. And yet they are soul destroying, taken en masse. It’s a noble sort of destruction, an emotional martyrdom, but burnout is the same whether it strikes Saint Joan or synagogue arsonists.

That burnout comes especially quickly when the elegies you write reach no one. We live, here in the US, among those who could not distinguish a dusky seaside sparrow from an English sparrow, and thus see no change in a landscape where the first is replaced by the second. One cannot love what one does not know. One cannot defend what one does not love. And so our elegies fall for the most part to the ground, unheeded among the handbills littering the street.

We can resort to jeremiads, that third and growing genre of nature writing, but jeremiads, like Cuban cigars, are best indulged in extremely sparingly. The world looks at the smoke coming from you and mutters under its breath. Fury is deprecated these days: one really ought hide one’s rage in a cloak of sarcasm, or better yet a brittle veneer of fake civility, so that the world can nod politely and get back to its business of dismissing you. 

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We live, here in the US, among those who culd not distinguish a dusky seaside sparrow from an English sparrow, and thus see no change in a landscape where the first is replaced by the second.

Ironically, as I’m sure you know, House Sparrow (English Sparrow) populations have crashed in Europe to the point where they’re red listed in some countries. It must be 15 years since I saw a proper flock, as opposed to three or four birds together.

But people don’t care, because they’re only sparrows, not some fancy rare species.

“ Fury is deprecated these days. One really ought to hide one’s rage in a cloak of sarcasm, or better yet a brittle veneer of fake civility, so that the world can not politely and get back to its business of dismissing you. “

Me Like. Do ya ever get the feeling you’re a stranger in a strange land? Like very little the Humans do make any sense at all?

While we’re quote collecting:

One cannot love what one does not know. One cannot defend what one does not love.

I love this, and love it as someone who often does not know the human names and biologic particulars of the creatures I engage with - but always their individuals, their habits, their voices, their daily, weekly, seasonal, and yearly shifts.

The post and this quote called to mind another two-line gem received privately/in my email about the abundance essays I cross-posted here:

At heart, I think that operating out of abundance/love is operating with the idea that the world is good and will continue. The scarcity/fear model strikes me as having the end of the world at its core.

In there, among other things, is a good working definition of committed activism as opposed to snark and status hunting.

The hope for us is in the former, I believe.

And you know, there are days when I think, for all the complex discussion possible, that the main reason people don’t want to love, to operate from the abundance model, is because it requires vulnerability and guarantees the experience of painful loss. To care is to risk.

Pain is inevitable, but we like to pretend we can avoid it with slickness, with clique-moats, with emotional disengagement, with me first me first.

Doesn’t help us, doesn’t prevent pain, and doesn’t stop the polar bear from drowning.

Whatever form you choose, whatever tone you apply, your writing still carries all of the spirit of the messages you seem to feel need to be transmitted.  My take on how the 80% of the masses (using the Van Jones analysis that we on the informed environmental side of the scale represent barely 20% of the US population) perceive nature writing, is that they don’t know the difference, unless they are specifically told (AM talk radio perhaps) that such and such is this and that. 

Please keep writing and writing; i referred many a midwestern college student to this site, as one of the reliable information outposts, in the realm of the internet tubes, that could be read even with dialup. One of the motivators for these sorts of conversations was the observation that throughout most of the Midwest, the populations of swifts and swallows was very low in relation to previous years.  Since they, and bats, are principle flying-insect predators, the numbers of some of those insect species’ populations increased, especially given the higher heat and humidity that saturated the middle of this country.  While it isn’t hard to use barebones logic in one’s text--less insect-eating birds means more insects and their associated pathogens, we humans tend to enjoy reading paeans, jeremiads, and elegies, and learning therefrom.

Thank you so much for writing this.  I’m working on becoming a nature writer, a twist in my tale for which your blog, among other factors, deserves credit, so this entry gives me pause, but not in a negative way.  More in a ‘think about what you’re doing’ way.

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